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Arash Dejkam




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Old Post  07-22-04 - 12:17 AM  
please!
any opinion is welcome as well as bug and incompatibility report.

http://portfolio.dejkam.com

Thanks in advance,
Arash




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Ben Measures




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Old Post  07-22-04 - 12:17 AM  
Arash Dejkam wrote:
> please!
> any opinion is welcome as well as bug and incompatibility report.
>
> http://portfolio.dejkam.com

Personally, I'd split the page into several smaller segments.

My first impression is "information overload". It took me some time to
get oriented (probably exasperated by the diverse appearance of the
different headings). If it wasn't for the address of the site, i don't
think I'd have got that it was a portfolio - I think you need to make
more prominent the information about yourself.

The only apparent bug I saw was that the contact form overflows the
column width for me:
http://ben.measures.org.uk/tmp/port....screenshot.png

The thin columns also have the unfortunate side effect of causing some
lines to only contain 3-4 words, and this can be a great source of
irritation to users. If users enlarge the text it can become very
unpleasant to read.

I think you could make some improvements in the area of search engines.
Your keywords meta-tag has /far/ too many keywords (iirc these get
ignored anyways by google.com), and there isn't enough text in your
h1,..,h6 tags (which is the main source of keywords for google
searches). I also find strange certain tags seqences like:
<h2><img alt="Development" src="devel_title.jpg" width="117" height="36"
/></h2>
(with this not being the only example).

Looking at the sourcecode, I saw some tag missuse and minor
technicalities such as:
1. paragraph tags being used where a bulletless list would better serve;
2. the strong tag is misused (as a presentational tag - I can see
correct usage in all of two places); and
3. some images have alt="" (which seems to be a workaround to make it
validate. Put some alternative text in there!)

I hope that helps. Sorry if I sound a bit terse but I've had a tiresome day.

--
Ben M.


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Arash Dejkam




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Old Post  07-22-04 - 12:17 AM  
> If it wasn't for the address of the site, i don't
> think I'd have got that it was a portfolio

Actually it is not a portfolio it is a personal homepage (kind of
promotional)
which may contain anything. I'm going to move it to www.dejkam.com
portfolio.dejkam.com is temporary.

> The only apparent bug I saw was that the contact form overflows the
> column width for me:
> http://ben.measures.org.uk/tmp/port....screenshot.png
>

Oh! that makes me mad too, IE and Opera do change the font-size of
text inputs but Mozilla (as well as your browser) don't. do you know a work
around for this ?

> I think you could make some improvements in the area of search engines.
> Your keywords meta-tag has /far/ too many keywords (iirc these get
> ignored anyways by google.com)

Ignore that, I just copy pasted those keywords from my older website, will
optimize it later.

> and there isn't enough text in your
> h1,..,h6 tags (which is the main source of keywords for google

What more can I write in them? do you have any opinion?

> I also find strange certain tags seqences like:
> <h2><img alt="Development" src="devel_title.jpg" width="117" height="36"
> /></h2>
> (with this not being the only example).

Why is it strange? it is an image representing text which is also a heading,
text-only browsers
like lynx understand that.

> 1. paragraph tags being used where a bulletless list would better serve;

Oh thanks for that, actually I've started writing XHTML after about a year
gap,
I forgot that lists can be bulletless, I'll correct that, I think I know
which parts of
the code you are referring to.

> 2. the strong tag is misused (as a presentational tag - I can see
> correct usage in all of two places); and

I know that too :) again can you suggest a workaround for that without
changing the appearance?

> 3. some images have alt="" (which seems to be a workaround to make it
> validate. Put some alternative text in there!)

Well, that is intentional and not to fool the validator. All those images
with alt="" are decorative, in other words they don't have any meaning, like
those photos in my photography column. if I write something
in the alt attribute, for example for the first photo write alt="picture of
apples"
text-only browsers would render that column like this:

Photography
picture of apples it is my first passion these days....

I don't want this to happen.

> I hope that helps. Sorry if I sound a bit terse but I've had a tiresome
day.
> --
> Ben M.

Thanks alot for your close inspection :)

Arash




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Neal




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Old Post  07-22-04 - 12:17 AM  
On Wed, 21 Jul 2004 22:47:14 +0330, Arash Dejkam <dejkam@softhome.net>
wrote:
 
>
> I know that too :) again can you suggest a workaround for that without
> changing the appearance?

I'd span the text and style it. There's no semantic reason for it to be
stressed, so boldong with CSS is correct.


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jake




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Old Post  07-22-04 - 12:17 AM  
In message <2m7l46FjojkcU1@uni-berlin.de>, Arash Dejkam
<dejkam@softhome.net> writes
>please!
>any opinion is welcome as well as bug and incompatibility report.
>
>http://portfolio.dejkam.com
>
>Thanks in advance,
>Arash
>
>

The first thing I notice is that the text is waaaay too small for me to
read comfortably, which means I have to enlarge the text. Why not set it
to 100%? That's 100% of what the viewer wants to see.

It's a non-fluid design which can't make full use of the browser
viewport; that's especially noticeable as the page is left justified,
with a lot of 'white space' on the right-hand side.

I have a minimum text size set in Opera -- this causes a layout problem
with Opera 7.51:
http://www.gododdin.demon.co.uk/ng/AJ01X.JPG  (70k)

You have various typos (which I'm sure you can find).

Overall, it's quite a nice looking page -- although in its current
incarnation it looks somewhat cramped.

regards.



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Jake


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Inger Helene Falch-Jacobsen




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Old Post  07-22-04 - 12:17 AM  
Ben Measures wrote:

> Arash Dejkam wrote: 

> I also find strange certain tags seqences like:
> <h2><img alt="Development" src="devel_title.jpg" width="117" height="36"
> /></h2>
> (with this not being the only example).

No, that's not strange, it's smart! Turn off
images and see how the headings are still there!


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Inger Helene Falch-Jacobsen
http://home.online.no/~ingerfaj/


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Arash Dejkam




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Old Post  07-22-04 - 12:17 AM  
>
> I have a minimum text size set in Opera -- this causes a layout problem
> with Opera 7.51:
> http://www.gododdin.demon.co.uk/ng/AJ01X.JPG  (70k)
>

I think I found the workaround for that, and will correct it. thanks.




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Arash Dejkam




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Old Post  07-22-04 - 12:17 AM  
"Arash Dejkam" <dejkam@softhome.net> wrote in message
news:2m7l46FjojkcU1@uni-berlin.de...
> please!
> any opinion is welcome as well as bug and incompatibility report.
>
> http://portfolio.dejkam.com
>
> Thanks in advance,
> Arash
>
>

By the way, I'm not a native english speaker, so I would be glad if you also
search for grammer errors, and let me know.

thanks again.




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Edwin van der Vaart




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Old Post  07-22-04 - 04:16 AM  
jake wrote:

> In message <2m7l46FjojkcU1@uni-berlin.de>, Arash Dejkam
> <dejkam@softhome.net> writes
> 
>
> The first thing I notice is that the text is waaaay too small for me to
> read comfortably, which means I have to enlarge the text. Why not set it
> to 100%? That's 100% of what the viewer wants to see.

Why not setting no font and font size for this site?
Why not letting the visitor deceide what kind of font and font size they
like best to read with their screen resolution with their window side?
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Edwin van der Vaart
http://www.semi-conductor.nl/          Links to Semiconductors sites
http://www.evandervaart.nl/            Under construction


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Arash Dejkam




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Old Post  07-22-04 - 04:16 AM  
Well, I made some changes based on Ben's suggestions.
But still can't solve the overflowing text inputs problem when text is
enlarged in mozilla.


"Arash Dejkam" <dejkam@softhome.net> wrote in message
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> please!
> any opinion is welcome as well as bug and incompatibility report.
>
> http://portfolio.dejkam.com
>
> Thanks in advance,
> Arash
>
>




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