I have worked really hard adding as much content to my website as I can
and much more is coming

new stuff

- more content
- new and improved footer
- fixed grammatical errors
- fixed some glitches (like double spaces and stuff like that small
things) on all my pages
- and some other fixes and added even more content

PLEASE TELL ME ANY OPINIONS OR COMMENTS YOU HAVE ABOUT MY WEBSITE

http://masterjuan0101.googlepages.com

Thanks in advanced

masterjuan <MasterJuan0101@XXXXXXXXXX> wrote in message:
1149548883.205688.249150@i39g2000cwa.googlegroups.com,

> I have worked really hard adding as much content to my website as I
> can and much more is coming
>
> new stuff
>
> - more content
> - new and improved footer
> - fixed grammatical errors
> - fixed some glitches (like double spaces and stuff like that small
> things) on all my pages
> - and some other fixes and added even more content
>
> PLEASE TELL ME ANY OPINIONS OR COMMENTS YOU HAVE ABOUT MY WEBSITE
>
> http://masterjuan0101.googlepages.com
>
> Thanks in advanced

Looks pretty good to me. Well, except for your pic. :-)

It would be nicer if you looked happy and friendly.


--
Red

masterjuan wrote

> I have worked really hard adding as much content to my website as I
can
> and much more is coming
>
> new stuff
>
> - more content
> - new and improved footer
> - fixed grammatical errors
> - fixed some glitches (like double spaces and stuff like that small
> things) on all my pages
> - and some other fixes and added even more content
>
> PLEASE TELL ME ANY OPINIONS OR COMMENTS YOU HAVE ABOUT MY WEBSITE
>
> http://masterjuan0101.googlepages.com
>
> Thanks in advanced

You still look like you are going to beat me up!  I would drop the
Google search box, or move it to a lower position, it's all I saw when I
first looked.  You might think that's good and lots of people will use
it, making you rich, but that won't happen.  If people want Google, they
will go to Google.  They have come to your site for another reason.
Serve them what they want.

I thought the site was pretty good first time.

--
Charles Sweeney
http://CharlesSweeney.com

THanks
Charles Sweeney wrote:
> masterjuan wrote
> 
> can 
>
> You still look like you are going to beat me up!  I would drop the
> Google search box, or move it to a lower position, it's all I saw when I
> first looked.  You might think that's good and lots of people will use
> it, making you rich, but that won't happen.  If people want Google, they
> will go to Google.  They have come to your site for another reason.
> Serve them what they want.
>
> I thought the site was pretty good first time.
>
> --
> Charles Sweeney
> http://CharlesSweeney.com

masterjuan wrote:
> I have worked really hard adding as much content to my website as I can
> and much more is coming
>
> new stuff
>
> - more content
> - new and improved footer
> - fixed grammatical errors
> - fixed some glitches (like double spaces and stuff like that small
> things) on all my pages
> - and some other fixes and added even more content
>
> PLEASE TELL ME ANY OPINIONS OR COMMENTS YOU HAVE ABOUT MY WEBSITE
>
> http://masterjuan0101.googlepages.com
>
> Thanks in advanced

Your site looks really good to me.  I actually like your picture.  It
is fitting for the content of the site.

Chris H.

Internet Security 101 - http://www.internetsecurity101.net

Jim Moe wrote

> masterjuan wrote: 
> - Nice design.
> - Poor HTML coding (still using v3.2 HTML. Yet you have XHTML v1.0
> Strict DTD?):
> <http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http%3A%2F%
2Fmasterjuan010
> 1.googlepages.com%2F>

Only one parsing error.  Not a big deal.

--
Charles Sweeney
http://CharlesSweeney.com

Thanks for all you replies there really helpful
Charles Sweeney wrote:
> Jim Moe wrote
> 
> 2Fmasterjuan010 
>
> Only one parsing error.  Not a big deal.
>
> --
> Charles Sweeney
> http://CharlesSweeney.com

masterjuan wrote:
> I have worked really hard adding as much content to my website as I can
> and much more is coming
>
> new stuff
>
> - more content
> - new and improved footer
> - fixed grammatical errors
> - fixed some glitches (like double spaces and stuff like that small
> things) on all my pages
> - and some other fixes and added even more content
>
> PLEASE TELL ME ANY OPINIONS OR COMMENTS YOU HAVE ABOUT MY WEBSITE
>
> http://masterjuan0101.googlepages.com
>
> Thanks in advanced

Looks a fairly good site to me; the 6 hats are interesting, isn't this
based on Edward De Bono's lateral thinking ideas?

Yes
verity wrote:
> masterjuan wrote: 
>
> Looks a fairly good site to me; the 6 hats are interesting, isn't this
> based on Edward De Bono's lateral thinking ideas?

masterjuan wrote:
> I have worked really hard adding as much content to my website as I can
> and much more is coming

I quite like the look of the site.

I like the fact that you have specified all of the font sizes in em's.
This means I can resize the site to fit my poor vision.

I'd move the bottom options (Contact Me | About Me | Daily Cartoon |
Cast Your Vote) up to the top; perhaps at the bottom of, or immediately
below, the google search box.

I agree with the other person, that the google search box is too
prominent. Personally, I'd leave it there, but reduce its height. It
could probably be 2/3 or 1/2 of the height that it currently is.

I'd drop the word "Navigation" from the top of the menu. It's
superfluous, everyone knows that those links are the menu.

HTH,
TC (MVP MSAccess)
http://tc2.atspace.com