quote: Originally posted by ashu_awasthi
Hi Guys,
I've just redesigned my site and I would apreciate your thoughts.
The URL: http://www.adas.co.in
Cheers!
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I might come off blunt, so don't taking anything personal. I'm just providi
ng some constructive and thorough critisms.
Right off the bat, your navigation images appear to be stretched out. It lo
oks very low quality. Your navigation titles could also use a better font o
ther than the default one on my browser.
Your splash image doesn't really explain what the site is about. "Adas Tech
nologies. Destiny of Intellects" sounds more like R&D than what your servic
es provide. You should have a short blurb, something like "Internet Marketi
ng & Software Development" next to the bird. The flapping bird in your spla
sh is okay, but its also a bit annoying since that's all I see at the corner
of my eye.
Your main page already has too much text. Review some "Web Do's and Don'ts"
about having all that text. No one wants to read through the whole thing.
People tend to skim so you need to make sure that you keep things short and
sweet.
Also, there are many slight language errors that makes the reading uncomfort
able and the feeling, more or less, unprofessional. For example, "We provid
e all the services to get your business on the web with easy use facilities
and software tools to upgrade your business to a new height which your compe
titors can never think."
I've also noticed your use of different splash images for every section. Th
ey not only have nothing to do with the services you offer (an image of an i
sland for your portfolio section?), but they make your site look amateurish
since they appear to be easily attainable through a free photo site.
All in all, there's a lot of work to be done. I feel that in my years of we
b design, there's a thick line between something that feels amateur and some
thing that feels professional. High-quality and relavent images, crisp font
s, and a cleaner home page will get you farther through that line.
Best of luck to you!
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