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Stephen Poley




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Old Post  09-10-04 - 12:22 AM  
A little while ago I was asked to tidy up the English translation of a
site. It didn't take me long to realise it had more problems than the
English grammar: frames, Javascript-dependent, mediocre when printed,
slow for the content etc. After some discussions with the owner I got
permission to restructure it, though with strict instructions to change
the actual page layout as little as possible. The new version is now
online at http://www.atlis.nl/

Your comments would be welcome.

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Deryck




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Old Post  09-10-04 - 12:22 AM  
"Stephen Poley" <sbpoleySpicedHamTrap@xs4all.nl> wrote in message
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> A little while ago I was asked to tidy up the English translation of a
> site. It didn't take me long to realise it had more problems than the
> English grammar: frames, Javascript-dependent, mediocre when printed,
> slow for the content etc. After some discussions with the owner I got
> permission to restructure it, though with strict instructions to change
> the actual page layout as little as possible. The new version is now
> online at http://www.atlis.nl/
>
> Your comments would be welcome.
>

Looks a nice clean site.

I use a 1440x900 laptop and the pages spreads nicely over the full window.

There is a minor validation error on
http://www.atlis.nl/en/pm/services/project_start.html and there doesn't
appear to be an English version of the pyramid image on that page which is a
shame.

I havent checked all the pages in the validator but with the exception of
the one above all those that I have checked do validate.

I like the fact that even with Javascript disabled I can still get to the
"top" level of each menu and get the "lower" menu options from the text on
that page. I mean, I can navigate the site without JS.

I tried it with Opera, FF and IE6 and it looked consistent in all browsers
with no obvious problems (I'm using windows XP BTW).

I feel like that bot/twat Ginae but it does look very nice
indeed...doubtless a better person than me will pick it to bits though :)

HTH

Deryck




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The Doormouse




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Old Post  09-10-04 - 12:22 AM  
Stephen Poley <sbpoleySpicedHamTrap@xs4all.nl> wrote:

> http://www.atlis.nl/

Well, it does not validate.

Besides that, and the ugly dividers on the menu at top, and the meaningless
graphic element on the left, and the odd way the site is structured on the
server (../../../) ... um, okay. Maybe it is not that good.

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Chris Beall




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Old Post  09-10-04 - 12:22 AM  
Spartanicus wrote:

> Stephen Poley <sbpoleySpicedHamTrap@xs4all.nl> wrote:
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> 

Spartanicus,

OK, this isn't my site, but I think there's a chance here for me to
learn something important.
First, how do you view a site without the associated CSS? (Um, as a real
user, not a hacker.)

(snip assorted numbered responses)
> 2) It's currently a strange mix, some elements adapt to my window width,
> but the important bit (the content) doesn't.

It adapts fine in my environment. Do you mean it doesn't adapt without
CSS? If so, how COULD it adapt? Except for <pre>, shouldn't raw HTML
adapt just fine?

> 5) Page linearity is a real mess, look at it sans css.

I've never heard the term 'page linearity' before. Google didn't help.
Can you tell me what you mean by this?

> 13) The "submenu" at the end of the index page is superfluous, these sub
> links are present on the pages that can be reached via the "main" menu
> (I'm looking at it sans css and sans js).

Does this imply rethinking his entire drop-down menu implementation?
Without CSS, there's no display:none to hide this stuff.

> 14) The breadcrumb bar is orphaned off to the right due to it being a
> part fixed width site.

I didn't understand this one. May it's the process I used to remove CSS.
The breadcrumb showed up right after the phone number and before the
primary page content. Or was the site changed after your post?

Thanks for any enlightenment you care to provide.

Chris Beall



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Stephen Poley




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Old Post  09-10-04 - 12:23 AM  
On Fri, 3 Sep 2004 22:28:05 +0100, "Deryck"
<deryck@REMOVElonghope.co.uk> wrote:

>"Stephen Poley" <sbpoleySpicedHamTrap@xs4all.nl> wrote in message
>news:c8jhj09gfrd9uc0ikjtpifk16pmt07hq98@4ax.com... 

>There is a minor validation error on
>http://www.atlis.nl/en/pm/services/project_start.html

Thanks. I validated about a dozen sample pages and found no errors; of
course I missed those which did have errors!

>and there doesn't
>appear to be an English version of the pyramid image on that page which is 
a
>shame.

True. They seem to have lost the AI source files of the images, so
they'll all have to be redrawn at some time.

>I like the fact that even with Javascript disabled I can still get to the
>"top" level of each menu and get the "lower" menu options from the text on
>that page. I mean, I can navigate the site without JS.
>
>I tried it with Opera, FF and IE6 and it looked consistent in all browsers
>with no obvious problems (I'm using windows XP BTW).

Thanks for your comments.

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Stephen Poley

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Spartanicus




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Chris Beall <Chris_Beall@prodigy.net> wrote:

>First, how do you view a site without the associated CSS?

In my UA I use Ctrl-G.
 
>
>It adapts fine in my environment.

The text doesn't flow in the available space:
http://www.spartanicus.utvinternet.ie/test/atlis.nl.png
 
>
>I've never heard the term 'page linearity' before. Google didn't help.
>Can you tell me what you mean by this?

 
>
>Does this imply rethinking his entire drop-down menu implementation?

I have js disabled, I didn't look at how the drop down menu is
implemented, at any rate currently it's wrong because it disassociates
the main menu items from the sub menu items.
 
>
>I didn't understand this one.

It appears on the right in a otherwise blank space:
http://www.spartanicus.utvinternet.ie/test/atlis.nl.png

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Jeffrey Silverman




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On Sat, 04 Sep 2004 01:10:16 +0000, Chris Beall wrote:

> OK, this isn't my site, but I think there's a chance here for me to
> learn something important.
> First, how do you view a site without the associated CSS? (Um, as a real
> user, not a hacker.)

Use Opera.

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Jeffrey Silverman




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On Sat, 04 Sep 2004 10:18:41 +0100, Spartanicus wrote:

> Page/content linearity means placing the content in a logical order.
>
> http://www.atlis.nl/nl/atlis/ has a decorative image, a postal address,
> phone numbers, a nav section and a bread crumb bar before the actual
> page header (which should be "About Atlis" btw), all this preceding
> stuff should be positioned *in the source* below the "Atlis" header and
> it's following paragraph.

I'll extend this definition a smidge by saying that, since CSS positioning
really lets you move bits anywhere on the page you want, the actual
position and ordering of the content in the HTML code can be in any order.

So, to help with accessibility and improve cross-browser or CSS-disabled
readability, it is good to actually order <div>'s in the HTML source in a
way that makes sense.

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Chris Beall




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Old Post  09-10-04 - 12:23 AM  
Spartanicus wrote:
> Chris Beall <Chris_Beall@prodigy.net> wrote:
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>
>
> In my UA I use Ctrl-G.
>
> 
>
>
> The text doesn't flow in the available space:
> http://www.spartanicus.utvinternet.ie/test/atlis.nl.png

OK, got it. You're using a much higher window size than I do.  Note,
however, that there is a point of view that says that long text lines
are hard to read ('cause your eyeballs get confused when they do a
carriage return). One recommendation that I once saw was that a line of
text should not exceed the combined length of the upper and lowercase
alphabet in the font being used.
 
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>
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> I have js disabled, I didn't look at how the drop down menu is
> implemented, at any rate currently it's wrong because it disassociates
> the main menu items from the sub menu items.
>
> 
>
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> It appears on the right in a otherwise blank space:
> http://www.spartanicus.utvinternet.ie/test/atlis.nl.png
>

OK, I understand. Another consequence of your larger window size.  This
seems to be a general problem with a 3-column design in which the widths
of the left and right columns are fixed. When the window size gets
large, all of the increase is applied to the center column, which then
gets longer than a 'good' line of text should be (see above), resulting
in lots of blank space. This could be made more attractive by centering
the paragraph (still left-justified) within the center column, thus
splitting the empty space. I think I'd prefer a solution in which the
side columns expand, so the proportions remain the same at all window sizes.

Thanks,
Chris Beall



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Chris Beall




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Old Post  09-10-04 - 12:23 AM  
Spartanicus wrote:

> Chris Beall <Chris_Beall@prodigy.net> wrote:
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> Forgot to answer this one in the previous post:
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> Page/content linearity means placing the content in a logical order.
>
> http://www.atlis.nl/nl/atlis/ has a decorative image, a postal address,
> phone numbers, a nav section and a bread crumb bar before the actual
> page header (which should be "About Atlis" btw), all this preceding
> stuff should be positioned *in the source* below the "Atlis" header and
> it's following paragraph.
>

I understand. This goes along with the ability to disable CSS.

Regards,
Chris Beall



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