http://www.fattyslims.com/new
http://www.fattyslims.com

Please critique both of these sites. My friend needs some feedback. Thanks
alot.
-Andrew

In article <Pf%Sc.53$nk.49@okepread05>, Go_Busch says...
> http://www.fattyslims.com/new
> http://www.fattyslims.com
>
> Please critique both of these sites. My friend needs some feedback. Thanks
> alot.

Layout is a bit iffy in Mozilla.  What's the point of the iframe?  It
should be "It's" not "Its" in the caption.  Centrally aligned body text
is difficult to read.  The borders look awful.  ISTM that most of your
content is made up of adverts.  Pop-up windows.  Hmmm.

The "Retail Comps" looks as though it's been thrown together using left
over images that other desigers thought better of using.

How do you get back to the home page?

The original, though flawed, is better.

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http://sponsorhywel.org.uk/

quote:
Originally posted by Go_Busch 
http://www.fattyslims.com/new
http://www.fattyslims.com

Please critique both of these sites. My friend needs some feedback. Thanks
alot.
-Andrew 
 


I don't like iframes, it's not agreeable.
Overall design is nice though.
Keep it up.

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In message <Pf%Sc.53$nk.49@okepread05>, Go_Busch <dontgotone@nospam.com>
writes
>http://www.fattyslims.com/new

HTTP 404 - File not found

>http://www.fattyslims.com
>
Inaccessible to the visually-impaired.


>Please critique both of these sites. My friend needs some feedback. Thanks
>alot.
>-Andrew
>
>
regards.
--
Jake

"Go_Busch" <dontgotone@nospam.com> wrote:

> http://www.fattyslims.com/new

The page cannot be found
The page you are looking for might have been removed, had its name changed,
or is temporarily unavailable.

Knucklehead.

The Doormouse

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In article <Pf%Sc.53$nk.49@okepread05>, Go_Busch says...
> http://www.fattyslims.com/new
> http://www.fattyslims.com
>
> Please critique both of these sites. My friend needs some feedback. Thanks
> alot.

Layout is a bit iffy in Mozilla.  What's the point of the iframe?  It
should be "It's" not "Its" in the caption.  Centrally aligned body text
is difficult to read.  The borders look awful.  ISTM that most of your
content is made up of adverts.  Pop-up windows.  Hmmm.

The "Retail Comps" looks as though it's been thrown together using left
over images that other desigers thought better of using.

How do you get back to the home page?

The original, though flawed, is better.

--
Hywel

http://sponsorhywel.org.uk/

"Go_Busch" <dontgotone@nospam.com> wrote:

> http://www.fattyslims.com/new

The page cannot be found
The page you are looking for might have been removed, had its name changed,
or is temporarily unavailable.

Knucklehead.

The Doormouse

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In message <Pf%Sc.53$nk.49@okepread05>, Go_Busch <dontgotone@nospam.com>
writes
>http://www.fattyslims.com/new

HTTP 404 - File not found

>http://www.fattyslims.com
>
Inaccessible to the visually-impaired.


>Please critique both of these sites. My friend needs some feedback. Thanks
>alot.
>-Andrew
>
>
regards.
--
Jake