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Gambit

2007-12-13, 3:37 am

OK, I am new to web design and graphics design but I am trying to learn
so after a few days of reading forms and tutorials on w3school I started with building a page for my paintball team.

This is what I have so far. www.3rdcommandos.110mb.com

Yes I know it lacks information and yes I did start with a free template but I have made quite a few changes. Also I have learned a lot from breaking it down to change stuff. And yes this is only the home page but the other pages will follow this same style.

So please let me know what you think. I am trying to make it look the best I can with my limited knowledge, and learn as much as I can while doing it.

Thanks

Full Circle1

2008-01-22, 11:02 pm

You actually have a really great start there. I especially like the background. I do recommend trying out another type set of font though because your copywrite information is very difficult to read.

Since it is your home page, I do recommend writing 3 lines of text that explains exactly what the 3rd Commandos do. Something like:

Love Paintball. Looking for Paintball Challenges. Look no further! The 3rd Commandos are a paintball league .....
(something about why you organized and what is your common unitying goal...)

Good luck. I think you are definitely on the way to a really interesting page.

Jennifer

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QUOTE]Originally posted by Gambit
OK, I am new to web design and graphics design but I am trying to learn
so after a few days of reading forms and tutorials on w3school I started with building a page for my paintball team.

This is what I have so far. www.3rdcommandos.110mb.com

Yes I know it lacks information and yes I did start with a free template but I have made quite a few changes. Also I have learned a lot from breaking it down to change stuff. And yes this is only the home page but the other pages will follow this same style.

So please let me know what you think. I am trying to make it look the best I can with my limited knowledge, and learn as much as I can while doing it.

Thanks [/QUOTE]