| Jim Moe 2006-07-10, 11:07 pm |
| lucy wrote:
> This is a very old site that I've worked on for years:
> http://www.geocities.com/conniesunday/
> Your input appreciated.
>
- The background image repeats. It looks hokey.
- It is difficult to see where one link ends and another begins until I
mouse over. Then the text size changes and the links start jumping around.
- "What a press kit should include" links to "Violin/Viola FAQ". I finally
did find item 27 but never did find out what a press kit should include.
And what does a press kit have to do with violins? Or musicians?
- There is no clear indication of what the site is about. Connie? Violins?
Bow string instruments in general? Teaching? What information are the
images supposed to convey? (Is the little girl Connie? Is the grown woman
Connie?)
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