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critique please -> rawkstar.net
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| Madbob 2004-01-06, 10:30 pm |
| Hi,
I've read this ng on and off for a while now so thought I'd post my site for
an opinion... so here it is:-
http://www.rawkstar.net - It's a music site focussed on the UK music scene.
Thanks!
Bob
http://www.rawkstar.net
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| Disco Octopus 2004-01-06, 11:29 pm |
| Madbob wrote:quote:
> Hi,
>
> I've read this ng on and off for a while now so thought I'd post my
> site for an opinion... so here it is:-
>
> http://www.rawkstar.net - It's a music site focussed on the UK music
> scene.
Man. I love your site. Great look and feel. It even look ok on my handheld.
one thing maybe.... if you make your image only the star, and not the start
with the text, it would fit on my handheld perfectly.
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| Disco Octopus 2004-01-06, 11:29 pm |
| Disco Octopus wrote:quote:
> Madbob wrote:
>
> Man. I love your site. Great look and feel. It even look ok on my
> handheld. one thing maybe.... if you make your image only the star,
> and not the start with the text, it would fit on my handheld
> perfectly.
i mean to say, take the text ("rawkstar.net") out of the image, and make it
actually text.
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| "Madbob" <b0b1NOSPAMINGME@hotmail.com> wrote:
quote:
> http://www.rawkstar.net
Some the text is too small.
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Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon
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| William Tasso 2004-01-07, 5:28 am |
| Madbob wrote:quote:
> ...
> thought I'd post my
> site for an opinion... so here it is:-
>
> http://www.rawkstar.net
sweet - perhaps the pages need more in the way of visual focus points for
graphical browsers
--
William Tasso - http://WilliamTasso.com
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| Toby A Inkster 2004-01-07, 5:28 am |
| Madbob wrote:
quote:
> http://www.rawkstar.net
Pretty good. Two little niggles though:
1. All lower case headings can be nice -- and they are in your case. But
as it is a presentational effect, you should use CSS:
h2 { text-transform: lowercase; }
<h2>Mini Reviews</h2>
2. You have a few "java script:" URLs. These are nasty. Use:
<a href="real_page_for_people_who_dont_have_javascript.html"
onclick="foobar(); return false;">Link</a>
For example, ditch this:
<a class="menu" title="mini reviews (pop-up window)"
href="java script:mini_review_list()">mini reviews</a>
and use:
<a class="menu" title="mini reviews (pop-up window)"
href="http://www.rawkstar.net/minireviews" target="minireviews"
onclick="mini_review_list(); return false;">mini reviews</a>
--
Toby A Inkster BSc (Hons) ARCS
Contact Me - http://www.goddamn.co.uk/tobyink/?page=132
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| Madbob 2004-01-07, 2:31 pm |
| "Disco Octopus" <discooctopusN05PAM@yahoo.com> wrote in message
news:ZCKKb.1760$hX1.70634@news.optus.net.au...quote:
> Disco Octopus wrote:
>
> i mean to say, take the text ("rawkstar.net") out of the image, and make
itquote:
> actually text.
>
>
Yeah, good idea, I'll have a play with that later :)
Cheers
Bob
http://www.rawkstar.net
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| Madbob 2004-01-07, 2:31 pm |
| "Toby A Inkster" <UseTheAddressInMySig@deadspam.com> wrote in message
news:pan.2004.01.07.08.18.59.788504@goddamn.co.uk...quote:
> Madbob wrote:
>
>
> Pretty good. Two little niggles though:
>
> 1. All lower case headings can be nice -- and they are in your case. But
> as it is a presentational effect, you should use CSS:
>
> h2 { text-transform: lowercase; }
> <h2>Mini Reviews</h2>
>
Ok, i'll have aplay with that later, cheers!
quote:
> 2. You have a few "java script:" URLs. These are nasty. Use:
>
> <a href="real_page_for_people_who_dont_have_javascript.html"
> onclick="foobar(); return false;">Link</a>
>
> For example, ditch this:
>
> <a class="menu" title="mini reviews (pop-up window)"
> href="java script:mini_review_list()">mini reviews</a>
>
> and use:
>
> <a class="menu" title="mini reviews (pop-up window)"
> href="http://www.rawkstar.net/minireviews" target="minireviews"
> onclick="mini_review_list(); return false;">mini reviews</a>
>
It will be done! Thanks again
Bob
http://www.rawkstar.net
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| Madbob 2004-01-07, 2:31 pm |
|
"Farlo" <hall.j.m@att.net> wrote in message
news:Xns9469691E6C29halljmattnet@68.12.19.6...quote:
> "Madbob" <b0b1NOSPAMINGME@hotmail.com> wrote:
>
>
> Some the text is too small.
>
> --
> Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon
You can increase text size in any browser if it's too small for you.
Bob
http://www.rawkstar.net
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| Madbob 2004-01-07, 2:31 pm |
| "William Tasso" <news27@tbdata.com> wrote in message
news:btghms$727ie$1@ID-139074.news.uni-berlin.de...quote:
> Madbob wrote:
>
> sweet - perhaps the pages need more in the way of visual focus points for
> graphical browsers
>
I'd Like to add some more graphics... but I ain't very good with these
photoshop thingamies so I can't do 'em...
I am going to try and get some music related graphics onto the site at a
later date though, I'll need to learn how to use photoshop :)
Cheers!
Bob
http://www.rawkstar.net
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| William Tasso 2004-01-07, 2:31 pm |
| Madbob wrote:quote:
> "William Tasso" <news27@tbdata.com> wrote in message
> news:btghms$727ie$1@ID-139074.news.uni-berlin.de...
>
> I'd Like to add some more graphics... but I ain't very good with these
> photoshop thingamies so I can't do 'em...
me neither
quote:
> I am going to try and get some music related graphics onto the site
> at a later date though, I'll need to learn how to use photoshop :)
>
beer is the answer - you may have used it in the past to subdue potential
partners in advance of obtaining sexual favours. now you can change focus
and encourage the creative juices to flow from your friends, colleagues and
casual acquaintances.
--
William Tasso - http://WilliamTasso.com
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| William Tasso 2004-01-07, 2:31 pm |
| Madbob wrote:quote:
> "Farlo" <hall.j.m@att.net> wrote in message
> news:Xns9469691E6C29halljmattnet@68.12.19.6...
>
> You can increase text size in any browser if it's too small for you.
Aye, and those which need to take advantage of that functionality will
already have done so. There is no need for you (as an author) to set a text
size.
--
William Tasso - http://WilliamTasso.com
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| "Madbob" <b0b1NOSPAMINGME@hotmail.com> wrote:
quote:
> I'd Like to add some more graphics... but I ain't very good with these
> photoshop thingamies so I can't do 'em...
Only add a graphic if it serves a specific function.
"Window dressing" doesn't count.
--
Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon
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| William Tasso 2004-01-08, 12:32 am |
| Farlo wrote:quote:
> "Madbob" <b0b1NOSPAMINGME@hotmail.com> wrote:
>
>
> Only add a graphic if it serves a specific function.
> "Window dressing" doesn't count.
Not even for its own sake?
--
William Tasso - http://WilliamTasso.com
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| Mark Parnell 2004-01-08, 1:33 am |
| On Thu, 08 Jan 2004 00:26:18 GMT, Farlo declared in alt.html.critique:quote:
>
> Only add a graphic if it serves a specific function.
> "Window dressing" doesn't count.
You want my windows to be naked? Pervert. ;-P
--
Mark Parnell
http://www.clarkecomputers.com.au
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| Barefoot Kid 2004-01-08, 3:33 pm |
| "Farlo" <hall.j.m@att.net> wrote in message news:Xns9469A73D8E3E6halljmattnet@68.12.19.6...
| "Madbob" <b0b1NOSPAMINGME@hotmail.com> wrote:
|
| > I'd Like to add some more graphics... but I ain't very good with these
| > photoshop thingamies so I can't do 'em...
|
| Only add a graphic if it serves a specific function.
| "Window dressing" doesn't count.
if it makes the site more visually appealing and attractive then it does have a purpose
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Hung Diep
New Media Designer
www.intro-spect.co.uk
0795 6576 319
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| "William Tasso" <news27@tbdata.com> wrote:
quote:
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> Not even for its own sake?
LOL!
--
Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon
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| Mark Parnell <webmaster@clarkecomputers.com.au> wrote:
quote:
> Pervert. ;-P
You write that like it's a bad thing?
--
Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon
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| "Barefoot Kid" <hungdiep@intro-spect.co.uk> wrote:
quote:
> if it makes the site more visually appealing and attractive then it
> does have a purpose
A tasteful photo of a gorgeous naked lady would greatly increase the visual
appeal of a banking website - yet, somehow I don't think that the bank
management would approve.
--
Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon
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| Barefoot Kid 2004-01-08, 3:33 pm |
| "Farlo" <hall.j.m@att.net> wrote in message news:Xns946A6F6FB8D24halljmattnet@68.12.19.6...
| "Barefoot Kid" <hungdiep@intro-spect.co.uk> wrote:
|
| > if it makes the site more visually appealing and attractive then it
| > does have a purpose
|
| A tasteful photo of a gorgeous naked lady would greatly increase the visual
| appeal of a banking website - yet, somehow I don't think that the bank
| management would approve.
dont be silly....
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Hung Diep
New Media Designer
www.intro-spect.co.uk
0795 6576 319
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| William Tasso 2004-01-08, 9:33 pm |
| Barefoot Kid wrote:quote:
> "Farlo" <hall.j.m@att.net> wrote in message
> news:Xns946A6F6FB8D24halljmattnet@68.12.19.6...
>
> dont be silly....
right - everyone knows bankers don't like pictures of naked ladies.
--
William Tasso - http://WilliamTasso.com
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| Farlo 2004-01-08, 11:32 pm |
| "Barefoot Kid" <hungdiep@intro-spect.co.uk> wrote:quote:
> dont be silly....
I exaggerate to make a point.
Sure, it's clearly obvious that a banking website isn't going to work with
a naked lady on the front page. Yet, that image would add quite a bit to
the visual appeal of the page.
So, there must be more criteria to a graphic on the page than simply, "It
looks cool".
--
Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon
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| Duende 2004-01-08, 11:32 pm |
| While sitting in a puddle William Tasso scribbled in the mud:
quote:
> Barefoot Kid wrote:
>
> right - everyone knows bankers don't like pictures of naked ladies.
>
I took nude photos of my bank manager. She was kind of a slut back than. :)
--
Duende
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| Madbob 2004-01-09, 4:29 am |
|
"Farlo" <hall.j.m@att.net> wrote in message
news:Xns946AC4EC03395halljmattnet@68.12.19.6...quote:
> "Barefoot Kid" <hungdiep@intro-spect.co.uk> wrote:
>
> I exaggerate to make a point.
>
> Sure, it's clearly obvious that a banking website isn't going to work with
> a naked lady on the front page. Yet, that image would add quite a bit to
> the visual appeal of the page.
>
> So, there must be more criteria to a graphic on the page than simply, "It
> looks cool".
>
> --
> Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon
I don't think it would fit the current design and theme of my site! :P
heh
Bob
http://www.rawkstar.net
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| Madbob 2004-01-09, 5:30 pm |
| "Toby A Inkster" <UseTheAddressInMySig@deadspam.com> wrote in message
news:pan.2004.01.07.08.18.59.788504@goddamn.co.uk...quote:
> Madbob wrote:
>
>
> Pretty good. Two little niggles though:
>
> 1. All lower case headings can be nice -- and they are in your case. But
> as it is a presentational effect, you should use CSS:
>
> h2 { text-transform: lowercase; }
> <h2>Mini Reviews</h2>
done... i think i got 'em all! :D
quote:
>
> 2. You have a few "java script:" URLs. These are nasty. Use:
>
> <a href="real_page_for_people_who_dont_have_javascript.html"
> onclick="foobar(); return false;">Link</a>
>
> For example, ditch this:
>
> <a class="menu" title="mini reviews (pop-up window)"
> href="java script:mini_review_list()">mini reviews</a>
>
> and use:
>
> <a class="menu" title="mini reviews (pop-up window)"
> href="http://www.rawkstar.net/minireviews" target="minireviews"
> onclick="mini_review_list(); return false;">mini reviews</a>
>
Done, woo yay! i had been meaning to do something like that, thanks!!
Bob
http://www.rawkstar.net
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| Barefoot Kid 2004-01-09, 5:30 pm |
| "Duende" <xxxspam@wipkip.biz> wrote in message news:Xns946AC58F63DA1xxxspamwipkipbiz@130.133.1.4...
| While sitting in a puddle William Tasso scribbled in the mud:
|
| > Barefoot Kid wrote:
| >> "Farlo" <hall.j.m@att.net> wrote in message
| >> news:Xns946A6F6FB8D24halljmattnet@68.12.19.6...
| >>> "Barefoot Kid" <hungdiep@intro-spect.co.uk> wrote:
| >>>
| >>>> if it makes the site more visually appealing and attractive then it
| >>>> does have a purpose
| >>>
| >>> A tasteful photo of a gorgeous naked lady would greatly increase the
| >>> visual appeal of a banking website - yet, somehow I don't think that
| >>> the bank management would approve.
| >>
| >> dont be silly....
| >
| > right - everyone knows bankers don't like pictures of naked ladies.
| >
|
| I took nude photos of my bank manager. She was kind of a slut back than. :)
yeah think i know her, once i'd made a withdrawal i lost interest...
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Hung Diep
New Media Designer
www.intro-spect.co.uk
0795 6576 319
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| Barefoot Kid 2004-01-09, 5:30 pm |
| "Farlo" <hall.j.m@att.net> wrote in message news:Xns946AC4EC03395halljmattnet@68.12.19.6...
| "Barefoot Kid" <hungdiep@intro-spect.co.uk> wrote:
| > dont be silly....
|
| I exaggerate to make a point.
|
| Sure, it's clearly obvious that a banking website isn't going to work with
| a naked lady on the front page. Yet, that image would add quite a bit to
| the visual appeal of the page.
|
| So, there must be more criteria to a graphic on the page than simply, "It
| looks cool".
nice, *relevant*, strategically placed graphics not only enhance the visual design but reinforce the
branding and visual identity of the site
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Hung Diep
New Media Designer
www.intro-spect.co.uk
0795 6576 319
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| Madbob 2004-01-09, 6:30 pm |
| "Barefoot Kid" <hungdiep@intro-spect.co.uk> wrote in message
news:d6FLb.331$6L3.300@news-binary.blueyonder.co.uk...quote:
> "Farlo" <hall.j.m@att.net> wrote in message
news:Xns946AC4EC03395halljmattnet@68.12.19.6...quote:
> | "Barefoot Kid" <hungdiep@intro-spect.co.uk> wrote:
> | > dont be silly....
> |
> | I exaggerate to make a point.
> |
> | Sure, it's clearly obvious that a banking website isn't going to work
withquote:
> | a naked lady on the front page. Yet, that image would add quite a bit to
> | the visual appeal of the page.
> |
> | So, there must be more criteria to a graphic on the page than simply,
"Itquote:
> | looks cool".
>
> nice, *relevant*, strategically placed graphics not only enhance the
visual design but reinforce thequote:
> branding and visual identity of the site
When i can figure out how to make some more nice graphics i'll add them!
Bob
http://www.rawkstar.net
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| Toby A Inkster 2004-01-09, 7:30 pm |
| Barefoot Kid wrote:
quote:
> "Duende" <xxxspam@wipkip.biz> wrote:
>
> | I took nude photos of my bank manager. She was kind of a slut back than. :)
>
> yeah think i know her, once i'd made a withdrawal i lost interest...
Yet you missed the obvious "deposit" joke.
--
Toby A Inkster BSc (Hons) ARCS
Contact Me - http://www.goddamn.co.uk/tobyink/?page=132
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| Barefoot Kid 2004-01-09, 7:30 pm |
| "Toby A Inkster" <UseTheAddressInMySig@deadspam.com> wrote in message
news:pan.2004.01.09.22.40.07.402139@goddamn.co.uk...
| Barefoot Kid wrote:
|
| > "Duende" <xxxspam@wipkip.biz> wrote:
| >
| > | I took nude photos of my bank manager. She was kind of a slut back than. :)
| >
| > yeah think i know her, once i'd made a withdrawal i lost interest...
|
| Yet you missed the obvious "deposit" joke.
couldnt remember that 1..
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Hung Diep
New Media Designer
www.intro-spect.co.uk
0795 6576 319
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| "Barefoot Kid" <hungdiep@intro-spect.co.uk> wrote:
quote:
> nice, *relevant*, strategically placed graphics not only enhance the
> visual design but reinforce the branding and visual identity of the
> site
Correct! That's why one doesn't just add graphics willy-nilly for the sake
of a graphic.
--
Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon
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| "Madbob" <b0b1NOSPAMINGME@hotmail.com> wrote:quote:
> When i can figure out how to make some more nice graphics i'll add them!
If they serve a purpose as Hung outlined above, great. Otherwise, it's just
a waste and may even damage your site.
While it's clear that a naked lady doesn't belong on a banking wep page,
you might add a graphic to your page with the same effect unintentionally.
Nothing screams "amateur!" like a pixelated animated graphic, for instance.
--
Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon
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