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Chuck

2003-12-04, 12:19 pm

http://www.geocities.com/my1964bug/

I am trying to build a website for my mother-in-law.

I downloaded "html-kit" and used it.

I plan on cleaning up the appearance of the code, but was wondering if the
tags and all looked ok?

As of right now, none of the links work. All I have done so far is just the
main page. Will work on it more in the morning.

Right now it is on Geocities, but the finished product will not be!

Anything that I should do different? Suggestions?

Also, is there a way to check for browser cross-compatibility, other than
just loading it in different browsers myself?

Thanks a million...

Chuck

http://www.geocities.com/my1964bug/


brucie

2003-12-04, 12:19 pm

in post <news:qJAzb.3344$Qd6.176@newsread1.news.atl.earthlink.net>
Chuck said:
quote:

> I am trying to build a website for my mother-in-law.



you've already shocked everyone with that statement in alt.html

Crosspost, don't multipost
http://oakroadsystems.com/genl/unice.htm#xpost

--
brucie
04/December/2003 04:56:06 pm kilo
Farlo

2003-12-04, 12:20 pm

"Chuck" <nospam@here.com> wrote:
quote:

> http://www.geocities.com/my1964bug/



Geocities is almost guaranteed the kiss-O-death, but I'll look ...

* Hideous GeoCrappy banner
* Pseudocode popup ad
* NONE of the images are working <- definately your fault

Yup, standard Geocrappy page.

Until you learn some/any HTML you probably shouldn't post sites here for
review. You wouldn't bring plain hot dogs to a cooking club, would you?

--
Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon
Nico Schuyt

2003-12-04, 12:20 pm

Chuck wrote:
quote:

> http://www.geocities.com/my1964bug/
> I am trying to build a website for my mother-in-law.



At least 1964bug(s)
Non of your pictures show for us because your pointing to your local drive:
file:///D:/web/kidsrkids/krklogo.gif
You surely must hate your mother in law.

Nico


Chuck

2003-12-04, 12:20 pm


"brucie" <brucie01@bruciesusenetshit.info> wrote in message
news:bqmlss$24f7li$1@ID-117621.news.uni-berlin.de...
quote:

> in post <news:qJAzb.3344$Qd6.176@newsread1.news.atl.earthlink.net>
> Chuck said:
>
>
> you've already shocked everyone with that statement in alt.html
>
> Crosspost, don't multipost
> http://oakroadsystems.com/genl/unice.htm#xpost
>
> --
> brucie
> 04/December/2003 04:56:06 pm kilo




No matter what you do, you can please EVERYONE.

Top post, don't top post, bottom post, don't bottom post, split post, don't
split post, cross post, don't cross post, multi post, don't multi post...

Sorry if I didn't please YOU


Chuck

2003-12-04, 12:20 pm


"Farlo" <hall.j.m@att.net> wrote in message
news:Xns94473182990F6halljmattnet@68.12.19.6...
quote:

> "Chuck" <nospam@here.com> wrote:
>
>
> Geocities is almost guaranteed the kiss-O-death, but I'll look ...
>
> * Hideous GeoCrappy banner
> * Pseudocode popup ad
> * NONE of the images are working <- definately your fault
>
> Yup, standard Geocrappy page.
>
> Until you learn some/any HTML you probably shouldn't post sites here for
> review. You wouldn't bring plain hot dogs to a cooking club, would you?




The ONLY reason it is on Geocities is because I have no other place to put
it at the moment. I just wanted to get it on the net so I could get some
opinions.

I know that GC sucks. I know they have banner ads, and I cant help that. I'm
not going to pay for a GC site.

Hopefully, I have corrected the image problem.

I know this will just get someone with your attitude going, but I have been
writing HTML for several years using notepad. I'm not
saying that I am an expert by any means though, but I do know the basics of
HTML.

I though that this NG was here to help. You know, constructive criticism.
That's why I posted here, but I guess that I was wrong.

Sorry that I made you reply to my post.

Hmmmm.... "Farlo". Added to my list of arrogant posters.

Thanks...


Chuck

2003-12-04, 12:20 pm


"Nico Schuyt" <nschuyt@hotmail.com> wrote in message
news:3fcf33b1$0$4696$1b62eedf@news.euronet.nl...
quote:

> Chuck wrote:
>
> At least 1964bug(s)
> Non of your pictures show for us because your pointing to your local


drive:
quote:

> file:///D:/web/kidsrkids/krklogo.gif
> You surely must hate your mother in law.
>
> Nico
>
>



Thanks Nico.

Hopefully I have corrected the image problem. I removed the path.

It was late and I was tired...


brucie

2003-12-04, 12:20 pm

in post <news:7ZGzb.3480$Qd6.1621@newsread1.news.atl.earthlink.net>
Chuck said:
quote:

> I have been writing HTML for several years using notepad. I'm not
> saying that I am an expert by any means though, but I do know the
> basics of HTML.



your markup clearly shows that is not the case. your markup is very poor
and shows you have very little understanding of HTML, if any at all.

if you're going to bullshit at least try to make it sound believable.

--
brucie
04/December/2003 11:52:22 pm kilo
William Tasso

2003-12-04, 12:20 pm

Chuck wrote:
quote:

> "brucie" <brucie01@bruciesusenetshit.info> wrote in message
> news:bqmlss$24f7li$1@ID-117621.news.uni-berlin.de...
>
> No matter what you do, you can please EVERYONE.



Have you tried offering sexual favours?
quote:

> Top post, don't top post, bottom post, don't bottom post, split post,
> don't split post, cross post, don't cross post, multi post, don't
> multi post...



Ok, but do you understand the terms you're using? Do you know why they're
important/useful? Have you worked out that "When in Rome ..." applies
equally on usenet as in real life.

Didn't Earthlink provide you with a guide to usenet?
quote:

> Sorry if I didn't please YOU



LOL: When the time comes for you to please brucie, you will have little (if
any) control over even the most trivial of things like which way is up.

--
William Tasso - http://WilliamTasso.com


brucie

2003-12-04, 12:20 pm

in post <news:bqniqn$24580e$1@ID-139074.news.uni-berlin.de>
William Tasso said:
quote:

[QUOTE][color=darkred]
> LOL: When the time comes for you to please brucie, you will have little (if
> any) control over even the most trivial of things like which way is up.



sshhhh! i wanted it to be a surprise.

--
brucie
05/December/2003 01:12:17 am kilo
jake

2003-12-04, 12:46 pm

In message <qJAzb.3344$Qd6.176@newsread1.news.atl.earthlink.net>, Chuck
<nospam@here.com> writes
quote:

>http://www.geocities.com/my1964bug/
>
>I am trying to build a website for my mother-in-law.
>
>I downloaded "html-kit" and used it.
>
>I plan on cleaning up the appearance of the code, but was wondering if the
>tags and all looked ok?
>
>As of right now, none of the links work. All I have done so far is just the
>main page. Will work on it more in the morning.
>
>Right now it is on Geocities, but the finished product will not be!
>
>Anything that I should do different? Suggestions?
>
>Also, is there a way to check for browser cross-compatibility, other than
>just loading it in different browsers myself?
>
>Thanks a million...
>
>Chuck
>
>http://www.geocities.com/my1964bug/
>
>


Nice clean look to the site.

Initial thoughts:

(1) set the alternative text on both balloon.gif to ALT=""
(2) set the alternative text on krklogo.gif to ALT="Kids R Kids Quality
Learning Centers"
(3) set the alternative text on the final image to ALT="KIDS R KIDS: 40
YEARS OF QUALITY"

Note: non-visual browser users will know that this is a link, but users
of visual browsers won't.

(4) set the alternative text on school2.jpeg to 'PHOTO: xxxxxxxxxx'
where xxxxxxxx is a meaningful description (or you could just set it to
ALT="")

(5) drop the "/>" at the end of tags; reset them to ">"
(6) In:
".....Our Kids 'R' Kids "state-of-the-art" childcare facility was
designed specifically for children
children ages 6 weeks up to 12 years old. ....."

you have either got a duplicate 'children' or you need a punctuation
mark after the first 'children' (comma or dash)



There's probably a few others -- but that will do for now ;-)

regards.
--
Jake
jake

2003-12-04, 1:46 pm

In message <7ZGzb.3480$Qd6.1621@newsread1.news.atl.earthlink.net>, Chuck
<nospam@here.com> writes
quote:

>


[snip]

quote:

>I though that this NG was here to help. You know, constructive criticism.
>That's why I posted here, but I guess that I was wrong.
>



No. This is the right place to come.

[snip]

--
Jake
Chuck

2003-12-04, 1:46 pm


"jake" <jake@gododdin.demon.co.uk> wrote in message
news:pHlQzaLoU2z$Ew4s@gododdin.demon.co.uk...
quote:

> Nice clean look to the site.
>
> Initial thoughts:
>
> (1) set the alternative text on both balloon.gif to ALT=""
> (2) set the alternative text on krklogo.gif to ALT="Kids R Kids Quality
> Learning Centers"
> (3) set the alternative text on the final image to ALT="KIDS R KIDS: 40
> YEARS OF QUALITY"
>
> Note: non-visual browser users will know that this is a link, but users
> of visual browsers won't.
>
> (4) set the alternative text on school2.jpeg to 'PHOTO: xxxxxxxxxx'
> where xxxxxxxx is a meaningful description (or you could just set it to
> ALT="")
>
> (5) drop the "/>" at the end of tags; reset them to ">"
> (6) In:
> ".....Our Kids 'R' Kids "state-of-the-art" childcare facility was
> designed specifically for children
> children ages 6 weeks up to 12 years old. ....."
>
> you have either got a duplicate 'children' or you need a punctuation
> mark after the first 'children' (comma or dash)
>
>
>
> There's probably a few others -- but that will do for now ;-)
>
> regards.
> --
> Jake




Thanks Jake...

This is the kind of help that I need.


Colin

2003-12-04, 6:44 pm

On Thu, 04 Dec 2003 06:44:38 GMT, Chuck wrote:
quote:

> http://www.geocities.com/my1964bug/
>
> I am trying to build a website for my mother-in-law.
>
> I downloaded "html-kit" and used it.
>
> I plan on cleaning up the appearance of the code, but was wondering if the
> tags and all looked ok?
>
> As of right now, none of the links work. All I have done so far is just the
> main page. Will work on it more in the morning.
>
> Right now it is on Geocities, but the finished product will not be!
>
> Anything that I should do different? Suggestions?
>
> Also, is there a way to check for browser cross-compatibility, other than
> just loading it in different browsers myself?
>
> Thanks a million...
>
> Chuck
>
> http://www.geocities.com/my1964bug/



Did'nt feel like starting your own thread then?
--
"We all have our little faults. Mine's in California."
Colin
Mark Parnell

2003-12-05, 9:15 am

Sometime around Thu, 4 Dec 2003 19:21:49 +0000 (UTC), Colin is reported to
have stated:
quote:

>
> Did'nt feel like starting your own thread then?



??

He _did_ start a new thread...

--
Mark Parnell
http://www.clarkecomputers.com.au
Blinky the Shark

2003-12-05, 9:15 am

Chuck wrote:
quote:

> The ONLY reason it is on Geocities is because I have no other place to put
> it at the moment. I just wanted to get it on the net so I could get some
> opinions.



I'm no HTML guru, Chuck, but I've been using Earthlink for years, and you
appear to be posting through them. For each of your email identities at
Earthlink, you have free space at your disposal. Plain space. No banners,
no nothing -- just your own work. *If* my memory serves me, each one can be
up to 10 MB. Is this too small for your project?
quote:

> I know that GC sucks. I know they have banner ads, and I cant help that. I'm
> not going to pay for a GC site.



Above...

--
Blinky - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Linux RU 297263
[still no new sig]
Chuck

2003-12-05, 9:15 am




"Blinky the Shark" <no.spam@box.invalid> wrote in message
news:slrnbsvufg.n07.no.spam@thurston.blinkynet.net...
quote:

>
> I'm no HTML guru, Chuck, but I've been using Earthlink for years, and you
> appear to be posting through them. For each of your email identities at
> Earthlink, you have free space at your disposal. Plain space. No


banners,
quote:

> no nothing -- just your own work. *If* my memory serves me, each one can


be
quote:

> up to 10 MB. Is this too small for your project?
>



Hey Blinky...

You are right.
I am using Earthlink and they do provide 8 accounts with 10MB each if I
remember correctly.

I have 2 of my accounts full and don't want to open and use another account
just for this temporary project. That's why I went with GC.


Wipkip

2003-12-05, 9:15 am

Chuck wrote:
quote:

> "Blinky the Shark" <no.spam@box.invalid> wrote in message
> news:slrnbsvufg.n07.no.spam@thurston.blinkynet.net...
>
>
> Hey Blinky...
>
> You are right.
> I am using Earthlink and they do provide 8 accounts with 10MB each if
> I remember correctly.
>
> I have 2 of my accounts full and don't want to open and use another
> account just for this temporary project. That's why I went with GC.



Try www.1and1.com PHP, mysql & 500mb of space. Where you sign-up it's slow but your
site will be fast.

--
Duende


Chuck

2003-12-05, 9:15 am


"Wipkip" <duende@email.com> wrote in message
news:2wUzb.29104$sb4.6524@newsread2.news.pas.earthlink.net...
quote:

>
> Try www.1and1.com PHP, mysql & 500mb of space. Where you sign-up it's slow


but your
quote:

> site will be fast.
>
> --
> Duende




Thanks... I will look into that...


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