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| Webadmin 2003-12-03, 7:27 pm |
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Hi,
I would like someone to have a look at my site
http://www.musicianwanted.ca and tell my what they like and don't like.
Thanks
Jason
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| Eric Bohlman 2003-12-03, 7:27 pm |
| "Webadmin" <webadmin@123musicianwanted.ca> wrote in
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> I would like someone to have a look at my site
> http://www.musicianwanted.ca and tell my what they like and don't like.
1) The design is fixed-width, not fluid.
2) Don't say "optimized for <particular browser>."
3) The banner image is quite distorted: it took me quite some time to
figure out what it was.
4) The opening page doesn't seem to have a visual "focus point"; you might
want to read up on the "pushpin" concept of site design.
5) The testimonials are located in what's just about the most inconspicuous
part of the opening page, underneath the survey. They logically belong
close to the mission statement, most likely where the (IMHO needlessly
large) newsboy graphic is.
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| "Webadmin" <webadmin@123musicianwanted.ca> wrote:
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> http://www.musicianwanted.ca
Yuck. You have a phobia for legible text, don'tcha?
--
Farlo, the Urban Fey Dragon
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| news individual 2003-12-03, 7:27 pm |
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"Webadmin" <webadmin@123musicianwanted.ca> wrote in message
news:LoZsb.385352$pl3.122772@pd7tw3no...quote:
> X-No-archive: yes
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> Hi,
> I would like someone to have a look at my site
> http://www.musicianwanted.ca and tell my what they like and don't like.
>
> Thanks
> Jason
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> ( Remove 123 from email to reply )
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Yuk - stick to being a musician. I need a larger font size - not what YOU
think I should have. Learn how to do a fluid layout and write valid html.
JM
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