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De Hen van Rooijen

2003-12-03, 7:22 pm

Would someone mind casting their weary eyes over
http://www.hn4748.comand give comments on the design & layout, please? I'm
a just starting amateur, working from scratch and I need tips, how to go
further. (My English is terrible)

Regards,

Henk

Nico Schuyt

2003-12-03, 7:22 pm

De Hen van Rooijen wrote:

quote:

> Would someone mind casting their weary eyes over
> http://www.hn4748.comand give comments on the design & layout,
> please? I'm a just starting amateur, working from scratch and I need
> tips, how to go further. (My English is terrible)

"Page not found" :-(

Beauregard T. Shagnasty

2003-12-03, 7:22 pm

De Hen van Rooijen pounced upon this pigeonhole and pronounced:

quote:

> Would someone mind casting their weary eyes over
> http://www.hn4748.comand give comments on the design & layout, please? I'm
> a just starting amateur, working from scratch and I need tips, how to go
> further. (My English is terrible)

That would be http://www.hn4748.com/ without the "and" I assume.

Ah, let's have a look.

1. <meta NAME="Generator" CONTENT="word 2002"> not a good idea.
2. nested tables and iframes.
http://www.html-faq.com/htmlframes/?framesareevil
3. cannot see URLs of each page, always says http://www.hn4748.com/
bad for search engines.
4. With Lynx, this is your entire main page:

IFRAME: links

IFRAME: inhoud

IFRAME: onder

5. Consider more apt filenames for your pages, instead of inhoud1.html,
inhoud2.html, inhoud3.html ...
6. Become familiar with this page: http://validator.w3.org/
7. Oh my. A clickthru ad for Evidence Eliminator! That will raise the
eyebrows of many.
8. From what I have seen, none of the tables and iframes are even
necessary. Try a simple two-column CSS layout and make life easy. Here's a
sample I made for a friend. Feel free to snatch it.
http://home.rochester.rr.com/bshagnasty/twocolumn.html

Your English is fine. HTH.

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Blinky the Shark

2003-12-03, 7:22 pm

Nico Schuyt wrote:

quote:

> De Hen van Rooijen wrote:
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> "Page not found" :-(

Snip the appended "and" in the URL.

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jake

2003-12-03, 7:22 pm

In message <3f9800df$0$168$1b62eedf@news.wanadoo.nl>, De Hen van Rooijen
<h.de.hen@wanadoo.nl> writes

quote:

> Would someone mind casting their weary eyes over
> http://www.hn4748.comand give comments on the design & layout, please? I'm
>a just starting amateur, working from scratch and I need tips, how to go
>further. (My English is terrible)
>
>Regards,
>
>Henk
>
>
>

IE6 -- Win98 -- 800x600 -- 17" monitor
=================================

(1) Horizontal scrolling. Try reducing the width of the 'Henk en nen'
graphic.
(2) Bottom part of the banner frame can't be seen

Looks nice, otherwise.

regards.
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Jake

Farlo

2003-12-03, 7:23 pm

"De Hen van Rooijen" <h.de.hen@wanadoo.nl> wrote:

quote:

> http://www.hn4748.com

* scrollbars at 800x600
* Tiny text is hard to read - do you want me to enjoy the site, or not?
* banner ads are bad. they serve no design function
* the sun symbol and general layout make your page look canned

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Beauregard T. Shagnasty

2003-12-03, 7:23 pm

Farlo pounced upon this pigeonhole and pronounced:

quote:

> "De Hen van Rooijen" <h.de.hen@wanadoo.nl> wrote:
>
>
> * scrollbars at 800x600
> * Tiny text is hard to read - do you want me to enjoy the site, or not?
> * banner ads are bad. they serve no design function
> * the sun symbol and general layout make your page look canned

I've also noticed that my mouse wheel does not work when the page is
viewed in Firebird and Mozilla. It's the iframe.

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