| Mister Peanut 2007-03-07, 6:15 pm |
| Hi Raymond,
Your site looks very good. Let me say first that you have a very good
understanding of graphic design. Visually, your site is solid, and all of your
interactive flash work is very smooth and pleasing to use.
I have a few suggestions:
1. You have three categorieson your homepage; Web, Print, and 2d. The way
these are designed make them look like buttons. You should make them
clickable. It would be much easier for the viewer to find the exact section of
your portfolio.
2. You need someone to edit the English in your website. It is
understandable, but grammatically wrong in many places. If you need help with
this, I will edit your entire website (in exchange for showing me a few pieces
of code?) Let me know because I really like how you have done some of your
interactive features (scrollbars, menus, etc).
Great job on the site!
P
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