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first flash site plz help
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| lvlaster 2006-03-25, 6:32 pm |
| yeah this is my first site i havnt even posted it yet but i wanted some advice.
i know its not the best but i just wanted some ideas and maybe some help
http://www.Ylamerz.com/bloodyhell/main.swf
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| stuffradio 2006-03-25, 6:32 pm |
| I think it's pretty good :)
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| 3141592653589 2006-03-26, 6:22 am |
| it's good, but the text is too big. and the picture in the background was dull, add colour please (i know its hard but do, it'll look better)
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| lvlaster 2006-03-27, 3:40 am |
| thanx ill try to do that. so navigation worked though? on all the links ...cuz i did the whole thing in 1 scene
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| Paul Andrews 2006-03-27, 3:40 am |
| "lvlaster" <webforumsuser@macromedia.com> wrote in message
news:e0497g$lp$1@forums.macromedia.com...
> yeah this is my first site i havnt even posted it yet but i wanted some
advice.
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> i know its not the best but i just wanted some ideas and maybe some help
> http://www.Ylamerz.com/bloodyhell/main.swf
A quick pass through with a spell checker and replacing "i" with "I" would
be a good start. Possibly add a touch of modesty and search through the site
checking links - plenty of bad links to be had (try My Music). The sliding
transitions are nice, but when you load the content, I get the feeling the
transitions aren't quite right.
After waiting awhile, having the text 'Upload of drive c:\ in progress' in
'My Midis' is alarming. Explain yourself.
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| Paul Andrews 2006-03-27, 3:40 am |
| "Paul Andrews" <ac297@dial.pipex.commmmm> wrote in message
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> "lvlaster" <webforumsuser@macromedia.com> wrote in message
> news:e0497g$lp$1@forums.macromedia.com...
> advice.
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> A quick pass through with a spell checker and replacing "i" with "I" would
> be a good start. Possibly add a touch of modesty and search through the
site
> checking links - plenty of bad links to be had (try My Music). The
sliding
> transitions are nice, but when you load the content, I get the feeling the
> transitions aren't quite right.
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> After waiting awhile, having the text 'Upload of drive c:\ in progress' in
> 'My Midis' is alarming. Explain yourself.
OK, looking at your code, it's a javascript "joke". I can't say I found it
funny. Nice way to introduce yourself to the world. I didn't wait long
enough to trigger the "Format of hard drive complete" message.
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