| ladyluna 2004-03-31, 1:37 pm |
| Hi Peter,
Overall, your site still needs some work. Your intro is a bit long. I sit and
wonder when we are going to get to the content. On the intro page, I like the
orange, but consider a different color for the navigation words. The black
bothers me here, maybe because it doesn't appear anywhere else on the page. You
could possibly make these words smaller, too, as they sem to be really
dominant. Maybe that is what you are going for, in which case you should make
something else on the page this strong. I like them on their respective pages,
but for some reason they bother me on the home page. I also like the animation
of how they stretch out and bounce back when selected, and the words floating
across in the background. Maybe you could continue some of these elements on
the home page so there is something a little more interesting there.
Your flash portfolio is hard to navigate thru. I like the back option, but on
the full screen open windows, I was a little confused as to where to go. I
ended up closing you site accidentally because I thought it was a new window,
and it was the parent window.
Hope some of this helps!
luna
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