| ladyluna 2004-03-30, 9:08 pm |
| First thing that comes to mind-- who or what is Hobbe and who is this guy?
Also, in the text you write: "moments and associated facts about Hobbe's
Internet Timeline"-- this wording is wrong. Are the moments and associated
facts about Hobbe's Internet timeline, would they begin in 1957 when there was
no Internet. You also might reword "click over the year" to "click on the
year", just makes more sense.
I like the color scheme. The grey background is kind of bland. You might
consider a simple texture to put back there.
You should get rid of the scroll arrows when they are not necessary, and watch
your word spacing in the pop-up windows. The first one has a weird space after
"establish US lead in" There is no reason here to skip to the next line.
Usability is good. I had no trouble navigating.
Overall, needs some fine touches to design, but good site.
Hope that helps!
Heidi
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