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| ShaneC webforumsuser@macromedia.com 2004-01-26, 1:30 pm |
| http://www.shaneclose.com
Any feeback would be greatly appreciated. I am already aware of the grammer issues.
Thanks!
ShaneC
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| adam cheasley 2004-01-26, 1:30 pm |
| Nice!
Only comment I would make is that it would be good if the viewer could
disable the sound. If you have already put this function in, I couldn't
find it.
Adam.
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| Rob Solberg 2004-01-26, 1:30 pm |
| Shane,
Your graphics are excellent, the Flash work is wonderful, the underwater
concept is cleverly executed. Very nice work! The only thing I would
comment on negatively was that the page layout was a bit derivative.
But overall I'm impressed.
Rob|e.9
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| DC Rich webforumsuser@macromedia.com 2004-01-26, 5:29 pm |
| Your flash is pretty slick. Nice color. I noticed a potential usability issue or two. I kept wanting to adjust the psi on the left hand side. I was also waiting for something else to happen once the sub sank. Also, your content screen is only about 15% of
the total screen (at least on 1024x768) That's a lot of wasted space. Maybe you should expand it by narrowing the header or reshuffling the "present mission", "last mission" stuff.
Great flash work though. I wish I had that kind of artistic ability.
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| soccerbeanie21 webforumsuser@macromedia.com 2004-01-26, 6:29 pm |
| I'm a newbie at this, and your work is awesome!! Hope i can be there some day.
I have a question though. On my site http://www.sbcyouth.org, i have a preloader set up. I also want to create a "play", "pause", and "stop" buttons for a sound loop that i want in there as well. I know that to have the "play", "pause", and "stop" butt
ons work properly you have to "linkage" them and export on 1st frame, but if you do that you lose your preloader.
My e-mail is soccerbeanie21@hotmail.com
Just lookin for help
Thanks
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| phatkow webforumsuser@macromedia.com 2004-01-27, 3:28 am |
| i agree with all other posts - nice stuff - one other suggestion: make the transition from 1 section to another a little faster - unless you were going for the underwater slowness - i got a little impatient waiting for satuff to happen and getting to the
content.
good stuff.
chris georgenes
mudbubble.com
Team Macromedia Volunteer for Flash
http://www.flashfilmmaker.com
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| anishu 2004-01-27, 4:28 am |
| cool stuff !!
nice audio :)
AnishVarghese
www.iyyo.com
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| ShaneC webforumsuser@macromedia.com 2004-01-27, 10:29 am |
| Rob,
Thanks for your time and feedback. I had only 6 days to create this thing in my spare time. I lost out on a job bid for a gaming company because I only had corporate work to show, and nothing flashy or "funky." So, in an attempt to win the bid, I whipped
this page up to show the client. I agree with your layout comments. It needs work. I suppose if I ahd more time, I could clean it up a bit.
Thanks again!
shane
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