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Adidas webforumsuser@macromedia.com

2003-12-10, 12:26 pm

i just finished this website for a church and i would really appreciate some feedback.

http://www.geocities.com/nickx82/ca...ation/Index.htm

if link doesn't work copy paste http://www.geocities.com/nickx82/ca...ation/Index.htm in ur browser.
**Geocities is a B*tch***
thnx


Johnny Cheesedog

2003-12-11, 8:19 pm

Adidas,

Site looks good and all of the links work. The only thing I'd suggest is
making the text "Not Because You are catholic...." a little less choppy on
the scroll. Maybe a fade in/out script might be better on the eyes.

And yes, geocities is a nightmare. :)

John

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> i just finished this website for a church and i would really appreciate


some feedback.
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> http://www.geocities.com/nickx82/ca...ation/Index.htm
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> if link doesn't work copy paste


http://www.geocities.com/nickx82/ca...ation/Index.htm in ur browser.
quote:

> **Geocities is a B*tch***
> thnx
>
>




Johnny Cheesedog

2003-12-11, 8:19 pm

Oh wait,

Another thing...

Under "Educational Services"....I'd drop the video controller and use a
standard picture viewer. Currently, it plays the pictures as a movie.

"Adidas" <webforumsuser@macromedia.com> wrote in message
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quote:

> i just finished this website for a church and i would really appreciate


some feedback.
quote:

>
> http://www.geocities.com/nickx82/ca...ation/Index.htm
>
> if link doesn't work copy paste


http://www.geocities.com/nickx82/ca...ation/Index.htm in ur browser.
quote:

> **Geocities is a B*tch***
> thnx
>
>




GilesW

2003-12-11, 8:19 pm

nice site - clean, simple does its job - what all little web sites around the world aspire to be! lol

I love the preloader aswell

Well done

Giles

www.nuclearfusion.com.au

BEST SITE EVER!!!! ;)
jemac2003 webforumsuser@macromedia.com

2003-12-12, 1:33 pm

i like the little disclaimer at the end of your post **Geocities is a B*tch***. coming from a nice catholic website designer. i thought you would have links to some local bars and breweries.

the site is a clean site, however it could be easily reproduced in html. why flash?

i personnaly create a site with flash for it is the only real way to be fully creative with the web - including animations, video, music, etc.

i really didn't see anything at your site that could not have been done using an html editor.

the basics are there and i love the start of the website, i suggest animated buttons and transitions between scenes. the slideshow idea you have on there is also a good start but needs help.

good luck on your revisions.


Adidas webforumsuser@macromedia.com

2003-12-12, 1:33 pm

thank you for your reply's.
the site is created in flash becouse we (me and my friend) want to have something in our portofolio as a start to webdesignig! true that doesn't have that much animations and stuff but it's for a church and we didn't want to make it to complicated.
and the slide show there i hate it to me doesn't make any sence why have all those buttons, i just wanted a back and next button thats all my friend wanted to put 1000 actions there :D. Anyway thank you all for replying.

p.s.
*whispering* i'm not that much of a beliver as i said just to have something in our portofolio :D shshshsh.... :P


William Kazak

2003-12-23, 8:28 am

The still photos are not consistent. I would hire a professional
photographer and get better pics. The scrolling on the home page came out
too fast for me.


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